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Tuesday, March 30, 2010

capstone 2010

I worked on finding the dimensions of the indoor field and possible materials i will use. i also worked on my book response

1 comment:

  1. Don't include information that doesn't have to do with capstone.

    You're getting three English grades on your blogs. I need to see more specifics, better word choice, and paragraphs detailing what you're accomplishing.

    You might also want to consider scanning documents and uploading them on your Blog to provide a visual for your accomplishments.

    1.3 Use descriptive language that clarifies and enhances ideas (word choice).

    1.4 Demonstrate correct spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and knowledge of grammar/usage appropriate for grade level (conventions).

    Capitalize the pronoun "I," don't use slang, and use correct punctuation, like periods at the end of sentences.

    1.5 Use varied sentence structures and openings to enhance clarity and to support meaning (sentence fluency). Use transition words between sentences and paragraphs (and so, because, next, after that, however, because, etc.)

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